i had a poo how bout you?
i pushed so hard my face turned blue
i screamed an kicked with all my might
then with a swoosh i saw the light
i had a poo how bout you?
it was really very tough to do
my legs were shakin an my head was numb
i musta ate to much raisins an swallowed my gum
i had a poo how bout you?
i looked an it looked like it came from two
it splashed real loud an the water was cold
you shouldn eat food when its old
i had a poo how bout you?
i never woulda thought it could look like glue
before i even sat it was on its way
by the time i touched the seat is was in the bowl to stay
i had a poo how bout you?
sometimes is green O.o like... who knew
i ate alotta salad an spinach an broccoli
but nothin rhymes with broccoli so the song is over now
Author notes
"kera's cool" YAY
A contest entry
- Im emo, im depressed, and suicidal..make me happy by SaviDropKick.Oi..
450 points, ended August 2, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me Sob Of Laughter LOLOLOLOL by HugsForEveryone.
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme Humor by sorries.
400 points, ended April 23, 23 entries
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Comments
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Nice of you to ask. Due to my intense medication, this is not a problem for me. LOL. thank you for entering.
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Aww rugrats! lolz
Haha, charming piece
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I love children's humour, especially when it gets (as it always does) lavatorial. The joke (?) about broccoli would be subtle if there were not lots of good rhymes. In fact, dozens. It all depends if you pronounce broccoli prop'ly.
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I can think of a million things that rhyme with broccoli, what do you mean. but yeah... your pooem was..... it was nice.
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This was disgusting!!! Lol!!
The most hilarious part for me was when you said in the ending that nothing rhymed with brocolli so that was the end of the poem. Lol, that was so random! This was gross but funny. Nice job and thank you for entering my contest. Did you edit your author's notes yet?
Good luck in my contest!
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You are just simple amazing. Simply classic!
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this is kickass
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awww lol thanks sis
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did it cheer you up?
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Whaaaaaaaaaaat? Lol!
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*CHUCKLE*
Hilarious! Love the innocence in this one. Good job, young poet.
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