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Hope,Pleasure,and a Cigar to finish

Your hand sliding,
it shocks my entire body.
Your lips lingering,
the hairs on my arms stand up.
Our lips meet,
my fingers slide up the back of your shirt.
We waste your parents room in clothes,
stripping our silk and cotten coverings off.
A shirt here,
a bra there.
You slide the pin out of your luscious brown hair,
I tear your shirt off.
My lips teasing your large tits,
your moaning replies.
A look,
a touch,
a slip of the finger,
a dropping of boxers,
you scream my name,
in response I thrust for the last time.
Its over as fast as it started.
The neighbors are awake,
your passed out,
and I am smoking a victory puff from my cigar.

Author notes

First erotic on here,but been writing it for a while.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • xDisasterous Angelx
    July 19, 2008
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    Babe.. I love it.


  • jasminesimmons
    July 18, 2008
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    lol i was nutral...i thought it was funny as hell..but cute


  • xXmimi...crunkXx
    July 17, 2008
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    Dude, kinkiness is amazing. No need to be shy, its who you are. And if anyone judges you for that, they are just insecure about themselves and their sexuality. (:


  • xXmimi...crunkXx
    July 16, 2008
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    AHAHAHAHA
    ....AHA
    Very nice, i wonder who it was written for xD
    Nice erotic one. Teehee, these are my specialty.
    I have some prewritten, but i showed them to som one else and they got off o.o yea, so im debating with myself lol. But if you need help, just ask fer sure.


    • AdamIzMi
      July 16, 2008
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      lol,um not written for/about anyone,just a....well really not a fantasy just well a poem...
      I'll write a erotic poem of one of my fantasies later so u can read if you want....?


      • xXmimi...crunkXx
        July 17, 2008

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        Fantasies are teh shiz, so sure.
        I would love to read some more of your poetry (:
        You rock pocket emo


        • AdamIzMi
          July 17, 2008
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          k,i'll have one up by late tonight...um,im kinda kinky so exuse me if I'm a little shy plz


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    July 15, 2008

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    btw Adam,
    its really good for a first ime erotic poem! good job hun! s and s


    • AdamIzMi
      July 15, 2008
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      thx,i try...lol to tell the truth,i have cybersex experience so writing erotica comes kinda natural

  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    July 15, 2008
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    awwww lol this made me smile soo big!!
    thanks for the entry!!!
    mwahhh!!!

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