Undress real slow,
I love your show.
As you move your
hips,to and fro.
Your dress,falls free,
your beauty, for me to
see.
Now standing there,
in your underwear,
my heart begins to pound.
your bra you slowly loose,
as it falls to the ground.
your breasts now on view,
not only my heart is pounding,
for you.
Don't stop,
I know you tease,
but what about your panties,
please.
You slowly pull them to your knees,
wow you are a tease,
Now standing there, so naked as can be,
please come to bed,
and let us see ,how much fun,
making love can be.
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I can hear the excitement in your words and the delight you take from this. There is a secret thrill in the way you say this, one of boyish delight in feeling in control. Such foolishness. We are forever tossed by the whim of women.
Peace,
Tom B.
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lol how right you are,and thankyou.
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Funny and sweet and sexy as hell. thank you for this superb little poem. Much love,
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Thank you ,best wishes Carl.
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Woo Who...Little Show!!!
Who doesn't love a good strip tease??? I sure do! Very nice entry...thank you and best of luck!!!
Az
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I do lol and thank you for your comments ,Carl.
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