He rendered me speechless
kisses drowning m'soul
Candles flickering sultry light
dancing on his balcony
smelling freshness of brine
music softly took us on
love's celestial journey
his lady in red breathlessly
reaching; frantic desires
wanton for more, more
Author notes
Prompt:
Listen and watch this video.
Lady in Red by Chris De Burgh.
write 10 lines
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Video Inspired. by Riftkin.
655 points, ended July 17, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering best of luck in my contest. Riftkin
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Lovely Poem
Hello, Well after watching the video then reading your poem I can see you captured the essence of the words to the song. You wrote a beautiful poem. Best of luck in the contest. You take care.
Bless You.
Sandy
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nice entry :]
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Beautiful and soft feeling. You blended it with the picture perfectly. I love poems about a dance as a prelude to passion. Pen on...
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