This place
Where I wait
Wait for it all to start
Crumbling down
This is where I waited
waited for you to come along
And save me from myself
I waited for so long
And thought I found the one
Then I was all alone
To wait even more
Again I started to wait
In that lonely place
Where I wait for the one
That can save me from everyone
I waited for so long
And then I found the one
I never was alone again
Only 'cause you came along
You saved me from myself
And everybody else
Because you came along
Yeah you came along
That place where I waited
Isn't where I wait anymore
Where I wait became
Where I waited, waited
Waited for you
Author notes
Each stanza is a different verse the verses go as follows:
Verse 1
Bridge
Chorus
Verse 2
Chorus
Verse 3
chorus
If you like the song, that's great. ^^
A contest entry
- Music To My Ears by Brandan Shamaya.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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i like this
u hav a good chance -
thanks, i like the flow, seems you put some work in on this one
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Well I'm glad you like it. ^^ And yes this did take me a while to write, a couple weeks I think. I only submitted because you were doing this contest and I randomly found it. XD
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