Passion

For her I have this feeling of strong sexual desire
Driven by a mania of passionate rage, burning within
From warmth to heat, my love turns to lust,
I turn; look at what I thought was her, I’m stunned
Emotionless, I must have been drunk, he’s undesirable.

Author notes

The Poetic Angel

Choose one of the words in the list and using it, it’s synonyms and antonyms make it the theme of a 5 line poem.

word chosen ...Passion...

PASSION- a feeling of strong sexual desire
SYNONYMS –heat, love, mania, rage, warmth, desire, emotion, passionate, lust,
ANTONYMS – undesirable, emotionless,

In a list

A contest entry

Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted) by Sesheta. 300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Ceridwens Soul
July 17, 2008

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And you say you can't write erotica Ju, I think this proves you can sweetie. Nice twist of humour at the end too. Well done

YLD xxxx
- The Poetic Angel
  July 17, 2008
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  Thanks You Jems
  
  lol i had the word list to help me and an awsome erotic writer for a girlfriend
  
  i love You
  
  xxx Your angel xxx
Galaxy2
July 15, 2008

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Thank you, honey for your strong sexual desire
I love you for that
'My love turns to lust'
I prefer love migled with a strong lustful desire, my love!

Kisses...all over, sweetie!
Galaxy2
- The Poetic Angel
  July 16, 2008
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  Thanks you Galaxy
  
  ~ Judie