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Not Forever

How do you know something's coming to an end?

Forever is such a long time,
Yet no-one lasts,
No-one lives,
No-one is,
Forever.

You make promises,
Keep secrets safe,
Love fills hearts,
But it's not forever.

Memories are made to fade,
Shadows meant to disappear,
Feelings dispurse,
Into nothing.

However much we want it to, Forever is just round the corner.

Author notes

A shorter than usual poem written by me... strange I know lol. but whatever.

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  • Crazy-Love
    December 21, 2008

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    A little surprised at the length, but it is definately not lacking. I liked this alot, in fact, I like most all of your work. (you're on my favorites) Keep up with the awesome writes!

    Crazy-Love♥

  • MarkusAngel
    August 11, 2008
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    you seem so sad in this poem but its full of emotion and such a great write. i like the short lines and everythign, found it wile i was scrolling through some older stuff. Theres so much great poetry on here but this really touched me. Im pretty new here so if you could give me some feed back on my stuff that would be great thanks

    keep writing


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 19, 2008

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    WOW, this is amazing and so truthful.

    A wonderful write and I wish you Wonderful ideas for the future.

    Rose