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Love; lingers out of the question
my exterior pulsating atonement
yearning to see harmony;
I give my heart, soul.

What can man do by his-self?
My desires please our SUPREME
so I gift my life
working without temptations.

I shall remain like the
precious lotus; untouched
by the worlds weakness
untouched by false piety.

Like God's pendulum counts time
replenishing infinity
I shall work for salvation
disconnected from failures.

Like the beautiful flower
upon the water's of life.

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Author notes

Quote: One who performs his duty without attachment, surrendering the results unto the Supreme Lord, is unaffected by sinful action, as the Lotus leaf is untouched by the water...Bhagwad Gita.

Photo art by: Bahman Farzad
Title: white lotus

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  • Arkbear gold member
    January 7

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    OMGosh....I am so sorry I have been too busy to stop and get to the Reading Lists......this is well-deserving of Bronze.....you have such a Gift....it's a lovely thing you have been blessed with :)

     

    God bless you!

     

    Bear ~

     

     

     

    I shall remain like the
    precious lotus; untouched
    by the worlds weakness
    untouched by false piety.

    Like God's pendulum counts time
    replenishing infinity
    I shall work for salvation
    disconnected from failures.

     

     

    Sighhhh


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    you travelled here in the light of HIS grace and your own beauty of the soul.....well done ..and my thanks for entering such a wonderful entry in my contest...


  • Katie Lazette
    July 16, 2008

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    Novy, what can I say. This is just beautiful beyond compare with anything else you have written. Your words just flow so eloquently. Don't ever stop writing poety or prose novy. This piece is just exceptional.


  • jcat gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Simply divine!!! Your word choice was just beautiful and lent itself well to the imagery here!! Very well done and best wishes