Leave a trail to follow
Start early and young.
The flow of your life
will escalate, so have fun.
Make believe a plenty,
you have until you're twenty.
Trap imagination's storehouse
wrangle it around your noose.
This is as it always should be;
fun in the sun-boys on the loose.
A contest entry
- TWO TOUGH HOMBRES PICTURE PROMPT ~#95~ FASTEST DRAW ALIVE by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended July 27, 2008, 9 entries
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nicely done , I like that "fun in the sun-boys on the loose
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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i wonder at times why we ever have to grow up to learn how to hit the switch to fire real bombs and kill with real guns.
Brilliant take on this prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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Yes, growing pains that lead to awesome destructive realities lol makes one want to stay under their covers lol and thanks
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a good piece, the cowboys of imagination, i remember the days, just barely lol when i was a little kid myself playing so.
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You're very good hahaha I barely remember yesterday lol
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Great look at the picture. A great write for it.
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'Really? thanks Z lol
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