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Eternal Dragon.

She rises above the
smouldering horizon,
a mighty creature
soaring from the
hallowed portals of my
spirit.
Her ageless heart beats
a thunderous cadence
of courage and battle
reverberating endlessly
upon my own weak heart.
Her eyes blaze with
cerulean fire
gazing with scorn
and derision
upon the follies of my
soul.
She soars, eternally graceful
through burning skies
raining vengeance down -
merciless in her glory -
upon the sins of man.
Her song is caught
by a trembling wind,
echoing through the canyons
of my hollow mind.
I raise my arms in praise
of her supremecy,
fall to my knees
in worship of her
undisputed divinity.
Her blessings
scorch my skin,
and I revel in the agony -
a willing servant to
this almighty creature
whose presence
weighs heavily upon
my dreams.

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  • devils angel
    July 16
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    wow... awesum as.. i like the way it has been penned out... good luck in the contest
  • This is an amazing work of art. Never have I seen the dragon personified in a work of art. Good job, great write, and keep that pen whirring! Good luck in the contest! Thanx for your entry!