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Perpetually swinging

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Spewed onto the floor
Desecrated, spread, eyes wide
My turn again ?
Personal barriers between
Pain and discovery
Blended, melted
Unforgiven.
Oblivion breaks its silence
Wrapped in spines,
A soft voice,
Yet it rends the soul
One movement
Quick and excruciating
Pulsing.
Vomiting its delicious song,
Pouring down the throat of your mind
Lapping your core
Restricted breath
Faster faster...
In this darkness near alone,
Accompanied by a black abyss
Inviting, womb like,
Jump in ... Swim, drown
Delicately driven,
Perpetually swinging,
Unclean !!

15/07/08

 

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Silence by ~piratelg
http://piratelg.deviantart.com/art/Silence-87794846

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    Ditto with what Cathy had to say
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you in our contest
    Julie


  • daviscth silver member
    July 24, 2008

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    Thanks for taking time out to post in this contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. It has wonderful imagery in it.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 16, 2008

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    ooooh my! this poem gave me chills. How dark is this! I love it, your words call such incredibly clear imagery into my way over-active imagination....The picture you added really does justice to the poem.
    Thanks for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 15, 2008
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    Wow I gulp in your words here Mark !
    Strong and powerful

    Vomiting its delicious song,
    Pouring down the throat of your mind

    What two lines this paints

    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie