shattered beyond repair like window glass
reflecting the treacharousness of one's own heart
not trusting feelings or emotions
so easily proved false
when all thats left of love is ashes
scarred and burnt but still in my chest
corrupting my very being from the inside out
staining my vains with charcoal
i scoff at such endearments as forever, never and always
such bullshit... such garbage
its a theory thats been tested and disproved enough times
to turn even the most loving woman cold
even harsh and bitter to the most sincere expression
but expressions are just words
words on a page... words in the air... just words
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Very good job here, I enjoyrd very much,,great usage of wording, as well as your overall message. This reminds me of some of my work. You have the ability to force the reader to perhaps read this twice, in an attempt to comprehend your meanings and message. This is so important in poetry, because yiu don't have a lot of time to make an impression. You need to do it quickly,, as you have done, amd I commend you for doing this so well. I will read more of your work,'
bye for now,
John
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