the first time that i met you
i knew i couldn't go
but you told me
to walk right out the door
you claim to be in love with
somebody else
you know i can't have that
i want you for myself
i'm no soldier boy
but i'll fight for you just the same
please believe what i'm sayin'
this ain't no school yard game
you know now how i feel girl
there not much left to be said
if i can't be with you girl
then i'll go right out of my head
i'm in love with you girl
don't you know my love is true
i'm in love with you girl
and i hope you feel it too
A contest entry
- Seeking for someone who will care about me by sOuL.
499 points, ended July 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any feedback is welcome
Comments
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you claim to be in love with
somebody else
you know i can't have that
i want you for myself
I dont claim anything anymore
just reply me one thing..
do you mean what you have written??
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yes, i certainly do mean every word written (shane Ishmael)
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yes, i certainly do mean every word written (author, shane ishmael)
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yeah, umm, your supposed to woo the host of the contest, not a girl. But a fine job you did mister.
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