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After the Act -Bronze

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After the act
of making love

I have wept

for no particular reason
but for this:

A butterfly swung to the sky
and seared  itself on the sun
so it could never swoop so high
again


I write poetry on skin,
I breathe the breath of words
like song to hum like wind between
shafts of feathers on eagle’s wing

Once stirred and held, but for a moment,
passing loses its grasp
on white clouds meeting blue,
wide, dangerous big sky
that needs filling

I scribe my poems, like breath
on frosted window
hoping the heat of my sighing
will take form and fly upwards
to become ash that falls
graceful as birds cutting oceans of air,
gentle floating of swift snowflakes
to land on the tip of your tongue

that gives voice to what I have penned

After the act
of writing poetry

I have wept





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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    After reading poetry
    I have had chills
    like now....
    this gave me goose bumps and a sigh...I love every word


    Lynda


  • desert places
    July 16, 2008

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    Reminds me of one of Robert Frost's speakers, like in Birches or something. I like the tying in of the first stanza to the last. It strikes the reader


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    loving the flesh or loving the word,, both can make you weep ..good luck xx


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    Magnificent. A veritable comparison. A vital release.

    And, yes, your breath always does just what you hope it will do.

    Beautiful poetry, once again.


  • Wolf Mancini
    July 15, 2008
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    Oh my...

    You definitly do poetry justice.
    You are a master.

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