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First Kiss

Blood pulsing
Heart beating
Faster. Faster. Faster.
Time stops,
Our eyes lock.
My mind steps to the side,
Sees our lips collide.



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  • Innocent-Lies
    November 14, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this very nice.

  • Shadow Darkstar
    July 15, 2008
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    Random, yet short, sweet & to the point. I found that you had a bit of rhyme towards the end, & I think that helped make your poem more powerful. We all feel something when we get our first kiss, & to be honest this seems like it'd be somethng out of a love story.