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a light within my heart.

A dream,
That's what it seems,
Can't comprehend,
This reality.

I swear I heard you
In the dark,
Laughing out,
And causing mayhem.

Feel you near,
When I shed a tear,
Know that your there,
Still standing here.

Don't understand,
The way I cope,
Can't believe,
I've lost all hope.

I'll leave a light on,
In my heart,
A special place,
That's just for you.

And one day
We'll meet again,
This friendship,
Can never truly end.

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in memory of my best friend emma, who died age 16, she's always in my heart, and i miss you like the day i lost you.

picture: tear-eyed girl artist unkown.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 15, 2008
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    A beautiful tribute to your friend --So Sad--So Young!
    best of luck in the contest!!


  • lindaburns gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    “Feel you near,
    When I shed a tear,
    Know that your there,
    Still standing here.”
    This isn’t sophisticated but it doesn’t have to be. It’s simple and feels like there might be real emotion behind it. Good luck in the contest.


  • TwilightAngel026
    July 15, 2008

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    This is a beautiful piece, full of true friendship, love and emotion. Well penned, and thank you for your entry.