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~*Baby Days*~

The days pass by
And I am anxious
To hold you in my arms
To breathe you in
To cradle your head
And to softly kiss
Your little hands
And your little feet
The days pass by
And I know it is soon
For you to be here
In the nursery
We built for you
Inthe rocking chair
By the window
I wait for you...

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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    August 1

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    This is so soft and lovely. You express so well the thoughts of a new mother and all that she wonders about her new little tiny gift. Beautifully done. Thank you for your wonderful entry.


  • CitrineSunrise
    July 30

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    This beautiful poem captures the waiting moments and also the joy of his birth. I love sitting in my rocking chair and watching him as he gurgles and sleeps. I hope you will give me permission to print this poem for Eric's baby book. I want him to always remember how much he is treasured. Peace, Liz

  • Animals
    July 25
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    Wow. That's really nice

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 21

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    Lovely. Just lovely. ~Pamela

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