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In The Beginning

 

 

Trojan bear

 

 

Giving comfort

without a heart

 

 

In the coldness

 

Silently taking

another passenger

 

Along the corridor

to reality

 

Letting go

when understanding

comes

 

No shame

nor tears

 

Just a parting

of knowledge

 

In the place

Of time

 

 

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    July 21, 2008

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    a tender softness from child to adult...the loyal teddybear makes his final stand...and with a sigh he lays upon the bed to soon be only a memory in a young boys head...sighs...another excellent! thank you!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Really like your take on this. Seeing the bears as transitionary as we move through life.. once they have served their purpose. Excellent!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    Awe... This is precious!
    I got chills with the lines,

    "Giving comfort
    without a heart"...

    well done here Best of luck in the contest.



    Delila


  • devils angel
    July 16, 2008
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    awesum... it cool as