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Sunset

In my life
Sunsets last forever
And even if the sunset ends
We'll just wait for the sunrise
To reveal the tears you left
Clinging to my eyes

Please just hold me here for a moment
Don't let me slip away
In the tide of washed up memories
That swirl around our feet
Tugging at our cloths
Fighting to draw us back
Into the depths that
Hold our fears

As the sun goes down
The chill begins to start
Reaching its long fingers
To caress your warm heart
And let the sunset go slower
for I fear the black to come
And let the sunrise come faster
So I can finally see the light

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Comments

  • uberly rockin po-em ya got thar.
    [[the gimps will attack-u'll see]]

  • meggie94x
    July 15
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    oh no u didnt! =O u stole a line from me and changed it *gasps dramatically*
    ~The chill begins to start
    Reaching its long fingers
    To caress your warm heart

    and mine ~ icy finger tips trailing along the contours of your warm heart

    but other than that good poem =]