Each day
I feel for the wind
The West wind
brings you to me
I taste you in the air
and feel your hands caressing me
The North wind
chills me and keeps you away
I feel nothing but the cold and my age
The South wind teases
She is warm and friendly
But you are not there
and I cannot love the South
The East wind is bitter
and angry
And yet I close my eyes
and he carries me to your door
I love the East wind.
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A contest entry
- Wanted: Free Verse rich in metaphor by BellaD.
950 points, ended August 1, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hell, I reckon it's good to be able to feel most any wind really as it lets you know you are alive, am I right? Multitalented you are Jeff, rhyme and free verse! Congrats on the silver my friend.
mj.
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I am very much a beginner without rhyme and meter
thank you for the kind words
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Sweet and very creative verse! I love this one. Thank you for your entry.
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Sometimes it's nice to just let the wind blow you where it will. A breezy free verse!
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