I watched my mother pissing
Through the toilet keyhole
When I was aged about twelve.
I think I should re-phrase that.
I watched through the keyhole
As my mother pissed into the toilet.
I didn't mean to imply that
I watched whilst my mother
Pissed through the keyhole.
That would have called for accuracy
Beyond the average female capability.
Sorry for any confusion there.
This is a nice one for you all out there
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That was sheer brilliance!! i didn't really think of the way the first stanza sounded till i started to read the second. That was amazingly done, really.
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whatthe?
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Very Amusing
Funny. I don't know if it is really poetry or prose but I like it!
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Kinkily Amusing and Mischievous!
Kinkily Amusing and Mischievous! This is going to earn you 100 lashings of my whip and 300 of my cane laddy! You naughty boy 'pissing about' like that! Whatever do you think you were doing tut tut!
This was such fun, and I can feel the intense curiosity and mischief in this, and visualize the scene, through the keyhole and through the pissing glass no doubt! dear me! Well penned and a delight for all juvenile delinquents... I am now a trainee geriatric juvenile delinquent and I feel that like me you too will grow old discracefully, well done bravo fab fun read!
Mischievous Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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I suspect you may be incorrect concerning accuracy.
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From three feet away? A small keyhole? Wow!!!!!!!!!!!
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I saw it in a book. It must be true...
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thanks a million. I don't think.
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A toilet with a keyhole? I must have one installed. Or should that be in the door, rather than in the toilet. Oh pish, whae cares? Have three crap claps.
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It was the toilet DOOR with the keyhole. I should have made that clear. Sorry, Keith.
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you're on a
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TWIT!! XX
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