Reach out to touch perfection in your dreams
Or never take the chance that you'll succeed
You know you have to try to do the deed
Go out and live your life at the extremes
But even if you never make it real
I know that you will understand the need
Vindicate your dreams in what you feel
Author notes
Form is a "Sonnette" effectively half a petrachan sonnet.
In a list
A contest entry
- Paint Me A Rainbow by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 19, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This could almost be a really long fortune cookie! Very nice work in meaning and with the letters. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Nice poem indeed.
I didn't even notice it was an acrostic at first lol.
Samuel -
This is a great write the rhyme is not overly done and reads and flows so smoothy. Good luck with this in the contest.
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Dreams can make us have hope, and the wish to grant us a better life. There may never be a pot-of-gold at the end of every rainbow...but we can all wish! Lovely poem. ~Sie
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Neato!
Luvit!
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Nifty!
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Simply delightful sir, with stellar scheme and flow, a fine example of a Sonnet if ever I've seen one, Bravo, and all the best.
mj.
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You don't pen acrostics often but when you do, you do it in a beautiful fludic mannor. This is lovely.
Love,
Amera♥
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