Can one be in love without a kiss to show it?
I do not believe so
I have your touch
Your sweet words
Your small tokens of affection
But never the taste of your lips
Never the heat that you say compels you
You left me here with shimmering memories
Of our time spent
My whole heart I gave to you
Only to receive it back
Blistered with sores left open
And now when I see you
My heart still aches
And I remind myself
I have never been kissed
But neither have you
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Oh yeah...you can be in love without a kiss,but maybe that other person doesn't love you and that's why no kiss! ha ha
Thanks for entering
darlintlc
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lots of emotion in these words. Your author notes say lust and it's kind of odd that the write is about passion without a kiss. Interesting concept. Thank you for your entry.
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I know, I had to write lust in the author notes for another contest
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Thank you for your entry. A good depiction of lust: all the physical attributes of a relationship, except for a kiss. It is well written; thank you, again.
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It sounds wonderful to me
The time will come...
Your poem is an expression of emotion and it rolls easily off the tongue when read aloud. I like it.
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ohh of course you dont need to kiss first to know you're in love
i love it!
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Sad and sweet, very nice write. thanks for entering and good luck.
PL
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Wow! So sad never experience the kiss of love. That only tends to make it worse sometimes anyway. Great Write. Thank you for entering
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OOOOOOOO this is sexc man. LOOOVE this. OMG beautiful, the way you put your words your feelings into this. Beautiful man. Awesome write!
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Very Good
This is really good. I really like the ending. Keep up the good work. ~Mishay B.
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