Extending beyond my reach
clutching at plush dreams…
Bring forth echoing
bubbly chuckles
that melt the hibernation
of my cold, weary heart.
I yearn for cushioned comfort,
I can hold through the night…
Author notes
Please credit the artist in your Authors Notes: I Want That One by manips-of-artist2
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A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 4 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww.. a lovely take! I yearn for that comfort too! Love the imagery in this and how the teddy bear is a "plush dream"
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thanks sis..and it has the under tone of the wanting child too lol
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Wow, this is some beautiful brevity!! It may be my most favorite-est poem I've read of yours, CinCin
"plush dreams"
Nice allusions to the teddy bears.
"bubbly chuckles"
Makes me think of sheltered's writing style...LoL
"melt the hibernation"
Very clever, considering the pic...and I LOVE IT!!!!
"cushioned comfort"
Damn, I love pillows.
Good luck, this is amazing!!
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awww thanks my phantasy
the pic, just so inspired me..happens everynow and then
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awww, i wanna hold thorugh the night, *sigh* this is lovely and a dreaming poem
i like it alot, and good luck in the contest sissy
stephanie ♥
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Epp, my bad
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Oh this is gorgeous hun...love the flow. Superb take on the picture my light! Good luck in the contest
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Oh! This is beautiful and a wonderful take on the picture prompt. You have painted a picture of softness in your words. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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