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Puppy's Pilgimage

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Trauma puppy's been around
seen such sights that would confound,
from busy streets to rolling hills
to travel he sure knows the drill.

Now he's come to my own patch
to sniff around and have a scratch,
on the road we'll see so much
with hills to climb and waves to touch.

For where I live there's open space
and many rabbits here to chase,
I'll show you all right from my arms
so that you'll not come to any harm.

The beach, a favourite spot to play
from Wilson's Prom to Port Phillip Bay,
you and I will jump the waves
as you help me to be most brave.

To the hills and mountain streams
a place where we can sit and dream,
for you have been around the world
but right now in my arms you're curled.

There's much to see so stay awhile
for to my face you bring a smile,
I'm glad your passport's up to date
for just a while you'll be my mate!









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  • DolphinLass silver member
    August 2

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    Thanks for this great fun, well rhymed entry, my pup sure had fun , but said he was certainly tired after, good luck

  • penman gold member
    July 19
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    excellent

    Ah, such a sweet trip you took. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 16

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    I like this - a companion in your daily travels, a comfort for the smile he brings and the joys you share. I like how you keep him from harm and he helps you be brave... the support!
    Marlene
  • butiful and cute

    xxx judie xxx

  • That's a wonderful write with cute imagery.
    Pups are adorable!
    Good luck in the contest.



  • Gorgeous; I love the sweetness of this and enjoy the imagery of cuddles with puppy

    Wonderful write hun
    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Wow, isn't it wonderful to show visitors around our beautiful state of Victoria. Maybe we are biased but it really is a unique part of this wonderful land we call home. I enjoyed reading this. Love Juls

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