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Sister (Acrostic )

Missing image
Amongst flowers she plays
Nothing can ruin her day
Gentle with words and touch
Electricity flows in her blood
Loving with a big heart
Willing to take the burdens of others
Innocent in thought
Twin of strong loyalty
Heart with battered dreams
Daylight made just for her it seems
Angel living here on earth, blessed this sinners heart.
Regret in life's mistakes, though learning new things everyday
Kindness in the healing arts
Withheld beauty waiting to burst free
Insecurities shown in the dead of night
No one knows that she puts up a fight
Going to the ends of earth to find
Soul's other half, twins for ever we will be..

Author notes

Second Challenge
Write an Acrostic but back to back-


ok if it sucks my bad.. this is my first ever!!! Acrostic.. Lol. and it's for my beautiful twin AngelWithDarkWings..

Hope it's ok sissy!

Picture Credit: the_twins_by_koitsuki

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  • Alright my dear twin sister. sorry its taken me this long to comment on this. You did an excellent job with the Acrostic, much better than your twin did.. I love it very much and it touched my heart so much.
    It doesn't suck, not at all. Its like way more than okay, its beautiful just like you.

    I am honored, & I love the pic..

    I love you lots

    kat

  • you are wonderful, and your writing reflects that,
    its amazing and beautiful,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 15
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    Such a gifted..

    ..writer you are my friend! A very nice dedication piece!


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 15
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    It is just perfect hun, you did a great job

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