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The Promise

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There are moments in our lives
when we regret

There are moments in our lives
that we are proud of

There are days when we wish
it would just END

There are days when we wish
the next day would never come

But with each moment we live
something more happens

And with each day we move forward
we have learned and become stronger

We were never promised
a perfect life

Only a promise
to live

~Lady Raven~

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  • sevnsyn silver member
    August 25, 2008
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    Powerful...

    Powerful words here,with you touch of grow,be better..Life still sucks though..Ha Ha..


  • Captain Jack
    July 27, 2008

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    truth

    Definitely a truthful piece, I can tell you my life isn't perfect but at least i'm living it. Nice work, like so many of yours are. :-)


    • vampira1665 silver member
      July 27, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the read and comment. Do I know you? So many change their names on here and I can not keep up with them.

      vampy


  • Baby Love Bunny
    July 17, 2008
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    wow that is so true, atleast im noot the only on who thinks this


  • owlishhunter
    July 15, 2008

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    The one and only certainty in life is change...sometimes for the better and sometimes not. But the more interesting part is the change that at first appearance is bad, even "world-ending" that causes us to not want another day...but in the end, much later oft times, we find these to be the moments that shape us. Who we are, where we are going... sometimes, we could never have moved on by ourselves without a bit of a shove. Maybe by those around us and maybe by God above, but even 'curses' as we see them end up being blessings in the end.
    So it is that it's very often hard to guage, but the one thing that stays the same is our inability to deal with those changes day to day as they occur...and that's why we have those feelings...

    "There are days when we wish
    it would just END

    There are days when we wish
    the next day would never come"

    A simply fantastic write, my love!!


  • Shining for You silver member
    July 15, 2008

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    well done

    This is lovely take one day at a time is good advice
    This is what your poem say to me well done.


  • solitarytear
    July 15, 2008
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    amazing

    your work really has alot of creativeness and imagery in it.....thanks for the share

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