Reality is what you make it,
only in the dream,
you take a tab of heaven,
gold shimmers in your eyes,
brings no pain but end,
in my mind shown numb,
vibrant dreams.
Author notes
A poem about an acid trip.
A contest entry
- Paint Me A Rainbow by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 19, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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You did a really good job.. Never didn't understand why people took acid.. I guess now in a way I know.. lol. Thanks for sharing!!
Angel
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Dreams should be vibrant and full of color. Nice use of the letters. Like the opening line. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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wow this was vivid and goregously brillant. I would of never known you were talking about an acid trip.
Nice job
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