You selfish bastard,
you couldn't stop yourself,
you couldn't control yourself,
and now you're pleased with yourself.
Tell me what you've accomplished,
that dark night,
she loved you...she trusted you,
you hurt her.
You're killing her softly, she'll never tell,
how lucky you must be,
to have caused her so much fear.
Selfish.
Drinking won't relieve the hurt,
that she's sustained,
but she's resorted to doing it anyway.
Selfish.
You never cared, and you went back,
time for seconds?
What a monster...
What an animal...
The third time should have been enough for you,
but it wasn't, and for eight years you did that,
You raped her over and over.
Your selfishness caused her suicide,
and you stupidity caused my hate.
I'd suggest you watch your back,
Because once I find you,
There'll be nothing left of you.
You killed her softly,
She never told.
Author notes
This is in Memory of my friend who had this happen to her. Eight years went by, she never told anyone. When She finally told me, she was already suicidal, she already had her mind made up. She killed herself becuase a perverted a**hole kept at it for eight years.
Karma will come back, but the only way for the pain to truly stop, is to call the police, to call someone.
To those of you who have been Raped, I apologize for everything you have been through. You are so strong for carrying this burden on your shoulders.
These Bastards will get what they deserve. They all deserve to be castrated.
A contest entry
- Rape by Angelic Vampiress.
600 points, ended July 20, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate by ApathysEnemy.
650 points, ended November 22, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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this was such a powerful story!! I felt the hate, but I also felt the sorrow and pain. It was definatly well-written and well thought out
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Such a powerful verse...dark and full of sorrow. Too many of us know this torture. Great write.
Nikki
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I can really relate to this one. I knew where it was going from the beginning. I've been there, in your friend's shoes. I know what it's like, and you did a great job in this piece. It's very emotional, very real.
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I am very sorry about what happened to your friend.I wish you didn't have to lose her.Sorry to say I know what she went through,the pain and fear of it.This is a sad poem for me to read but it is also something that bring some people to realize things like this.This poem and you earned that Gold.I don't know when she died but I hope she can now rest in peace.Again I'm sorry you lost your friend.
*D.E.D.31*
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This poem makes me so angry... I don't understand how people can do something like this. I'm very sorry for the pain that your friend had to endure, and for the fact that you lost your friend. People who can do something like this and live with themselves are just disgusting. I'm so sorry.
Thank you for sharing this poem; it meant a lot to read because I can relate to some of her pain though I never had to endure multiple attacks. Excellently written and very strong message; you definitely deserved gold. -
omg I'm soooo sorry trust me if I knew who did it I would go get him and bring him to you I love this poem *tears* thank you so much for sharing this poem with me
roserose
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