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Captivating Kisses

Long ago I dreamt of the moment I'd taste your kiss
And as if magically I feel transformed
Never before have I felt so beautiful.
Your kisses make my soul smile.
Visions of the night before dance in my head.
How could one man have this effect on me?
We've taken a step into the unknown.
Mesmerized by a series of first...

First Meeting...

First Embrace...

First Kiss...

First...

I can hardly speak the words.
My heart I give freely.
Releasing the fears that lie within
Our lips collide
And our bodies become one
Captivated by your strong embrace I yield to you
And indulge in all the sins my body can take.
For so long we have spoke of this moment
Yet our words do it no justice
In your grasp I release all that came before...

This Meeting...

This Embrace...

This Kiss...

But most importantly this love.


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“A kiss that is never tasted, is forever and ever wasted.”

-Billie Holiday

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  • InRain
    November 25
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    Oh yeah! I love this!! This is what i'm looking for!

    Just the way some of your words stand alone, it draws me into it, and it's so well written i can relate my own thoughts to it.

    Superb work my dear!


  • spideracer gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    Nice

    You must be in love, oh how sweet you write.


  • zillion
    July 16, 2008
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    a very romantic poem for a very romantic quote.