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please.

squeezeing my wrist,
as my eyesbecome blury.
you made your mark now leave.
you beast.. you monster!
you lie and cheat,
you controlled my life for too long.
its not my fault anymore.... its yours.
everything i liked seemed wrong to you....
your wrong for me.
you say you love me... but i have nothing else to say to you.
i did love you.. but people make mistakes.
you think your so cool because your girlfriend is popular.
im done with you.
and every thing you did behind my back can stay with you.
dont touch me!
let me move on. as you do too.
please leave.
please!
my life is better without you.
starting your drama.
my baby doesnt deserve this.
and my lover doesnt need to worry about me leaving the house.
stay out of my life,
please.

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  • Symphony
    April 28

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    Very powerfully emotional, and wow - so much fear in this also, it's painful, and a story none of us would LIKE to live but which many do - thanks for sharing it, and,

    thanks for entering

  • Very strong emotions in this poem. Although it is a painful story, it is well written. Very good job.

    Mike

  • theharper08
    July 20, 2008
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    touching

    This is ace. It's a stroy most can related to. I did and it touched me.