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Colors of Life

Roses and rainbows all colors to adore
Orbs of light and gardens of delight
Yellows shining bright and daisies taking flight
Green vines of envy break away
Blessing the ground with new life
Intriguing colors of sky and ground
Vibrantly dance all around.

A contest entry

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  • shortyjo
    October 1
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    beautiful Makes me want to go for a springtime walk!!

  • heylookaneuphemism
    September 11

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    Not to be redundant, but this is vibrant! Rich and lush imagery. Beautiful writing. I enjoyed reading your talent.


  • Amera gold member
    July 20

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    Color and motion woven together in beauty that insoires and soothes. This is beautiful and well deserving of the gold.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Jesann gold member
    March 4

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    A wonderful take on the contest requirements.
    A great colourful poem full of life and vibrancy.

    Delightful.

    Congrats on the Gold.


  • penman gold member
    January 13
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    Wonderful

    such a blessed read. And so deserving of the gold


  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008

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    I really loved this. you did such a wonderful job painting a beautiful rainbow with words..It flowed so well and created such awonderful image! Congratulations on winning gold!!!


    Angel


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Congratulations on the gold, a beautiful poem ...well deserved...Sue


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 19, 2008

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    Ahh, now this I love. You used the letters excellently and painted a most beautiful and vivid image of colorful nature. Perfect. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 15, 2008

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    Another beautiful Background to enhance your beautiful composition--I noticed a touch of "Rhyme" here and,
    knowing me, you know that it intrigues me all the more.
    --Best of luck in the contest!


  • B.m.w
    July 15, 2008

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    This poem is beautiful. You did an amazing job with the concept of the contest. Good luck in the contest.

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