Hidden deep inside her darkness,
Is the beauty looking to escape.
For that day when she lost him,
He left her with a final kiss.
That peck enclosed their fates.
His fate was to lose his life,
Only shortly after "the kiss."
Leaving her to be alone evermore.
Her fate concealed in the twilight.
Lost in herself, looking for the path,
The path to be saved from her darkness,
That locked her away deep within.
From the start of that fateful day,
Her beauty, and his life,
Were sealed with a kiss.
Author notes
I couldn't get it straight at first. Then I looked at the picture and some random titles I had written down. Then it started coming to me. It may not quite go with the picture perfectly but still it works well. ^^""
Picture credit!?
http://saraheliza.deviantart.com/art/unrealistic-2-91531920
thank you saraheliza from deviantart for this amazing picture. ^^
A contest entry
- Individualized Picture Prompts #2 by notorious.
722 points, ended July 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, beautifully written. Out of all the poems I've ever read... never have I read one such as this. You brought two lives together, perfectly that matches...
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Thank you very much. ^^ I also just realized that reminds of a song/music video I used to love. Weird xD
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Okay...I guess I forgot to make this a rule, but it really pisses me off when people decide to submit their entry into more than just my contest. -.-
"That peck enclosed their fates."
Something catches my attention about this line...it's uniquely stated.
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SORRY!? ^^"" I can take it out of that one anyway xD I have two in that contest so It doesn't matter to me.
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This picture is beautiful and amazing. Ideas are already flowing into my mind. This may take a while. ^^"
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