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Goldy Locks!


Beautiful long locks draped over her shoulders,
Covering her silky bright red dress,
The porridge was everywhere- what a huge mess!
She turned into the light, making her hair even golder,

'I might have a rest for now I am tired'
She whipped her strawberry mouth and waltzed to the chair,
When her eyed opened, there appeared a large bear,
Looking at her silk, she was what he admired,

Her mouth dropped in horror and she began to scream,
Little bear started to cry and ran to his porridge,
Mrs Bear ran in, then turned towards the storage,
and Mr bear just sat there laughing at this tremendous scene,

 

She awoke all dazzled and looked at the sparkling moonlight,

'Its dark, I'm scared.. Let me go home!'

She howled and cried a terrible groan,

The big bear beckoned- which gave her a terrible fright!

 

He took her crystal hand and led her down the road,

Her tears wrapped her body in stems of blue,

'Dont worry Goldy-locks.. I wont harm you'

 Everything pitch black, their dark slim figures glowed,

 

She opened her eyes and then was near home,

With a small parcel in her hand, a miniature doll,

It was miniature her, and in the hand a scroll,

'Dont steal from us again or you wont be free to roam'

 

Gold-Locks, was no thief anymore,

she was reminded,

Porridge everyday was left at her door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This poem was written for a contest. We had to make a poem from a list of fairy tales and we chose which one.

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Comments


  • Summer Moon
    August 10

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    aww, what a lovely poem! so sweet, it adds a whole new element to this beloved children's tale..
    nice work! i'm sure my siblings will love this new version of the story

    you write sooo well, keep it up!

    *rose
  • haha...very nice poem!!! The ending is awesome!!thanx for entering my contest...good luck!!!
  • hey..i like this poem..it is really funny!! LOL