A woman stands before you,
she wears nothing.
Do you desire her?
Blonde hair glows in the light.
Green eyes shining.
Sexy, kissable lips that whisper your name.
The body of a Goddess,
hourglass figure,
with perfect breasts and hips.
Long slender legs
that end with dainty ankles and feet.
It's good that that's what you see,
but it's too bad that isn't really me.
Because she is beautiful.
first impression
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I like this poem.
I think you could have had a little bit of a better ending.. (sorry to critisize its just what i do) but overall pretty amazing. 
good job.
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haha, dont worry, criticism is always accepted, as long as its constructive
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