Moon hangs heart sight in aqua
as a lake distant caresses dream
in loving silence of zephyr reeds
to arouse curiosity in desires plunging.
The glitz of beauty to look massive
wreaths colors as grains of poems
a message came to take shelter
in my soul's heat for crazier dilemmas.
Author notes
Prompt : "There was something about him/her that was like biting on tinfoil.".....a paraphrase from Steven King
50 words
A contest entry
- Biting on Tinfoil by breedluv.
1350 points, ended July 17, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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I'm sorry, I really didn't 'get' this. Either the metaphor was too deep, or I'm too shallow. Either way,thanks for your entry.
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