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I’m Alone, Within Me

Where words wander the halls,
And nothing escapes the walls,
And all that’s mine is mine…

Every membrane has the time for me.
Inside my head you see,
As funny as it may be…
This is the only place I feel really free…

The place I can be what I want,
See what I want.
Say what needs to be said

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    Great!

    I enjoyed the meter and flow and loved the 2nd stanza the most. It is something I can totally relate to. Great penning and best wishes in the contest. *sta*~mandie~


  • Cannonsfire
    July 15, 2008
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    Well sometimes being alone with yourself is the safest sanctuary of them all. Love, C