A map etched into my brain
With the invisible route in memory
Brought to the forefront of my mind
Truest location of tranquility
Soothing the soul
An episode of freedom
She is my haven
Free from suffering
As our hearts resonate together
Author notes
I loved this...she is my sanctuary...the one I love. To be with her is the most stress-free place in the entire world...her heart, her soul, her mind. I wish I was there every waking moment.
Good luck to the other contestants!
A contest entry
- Quickie-Prompt-10 x 10 lines-An hour to write....on..... by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended July 15, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is extremely sweet. I was going to enter this exact contest, but you slaughtered it. Congrats on the gold!
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GOLDDD!! its about time. this was soooo beautiful, you definitely deserved it!! wow i dont even know what to say about it...the imagery, the wording...it all works together so beautifully!! greatttt job i love it =)
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Well done on the gold trophy! You definately deserved it =)
Much love,
Sammie .. xx -
Ah. How wondrous ...
to find a soul to niche in.
Congratulations on your well deserved Gold.
Blessed be.
Myra
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Congrats on the gold it was a well deserved win a beautiful poem.
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This is great love the way you set it up. Very loving and makes you wanna know the person your talking about.
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This is so written from the heart and you can feel it and I sighed over every word. Love, C
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