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dirty girls are better when wet



 

Biting my lower lip,

naughty it is...

to un-shamefully admit,

blushin' just a lil bit.

 

Bathe me in earth

sweetly tickle these toes

in luscious of dirt

Relieve my soulful thirst!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Contest prompt: 10 lines..my sanctuary..one hour quickie.

I love earth..happiest when my toes are covered in gardens dirt!
my sanctuary is natures earth.

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  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    July 15, 2008

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    I much like it,
    nature lover
    loving in nature
    and
    loving it!

    Sol


  • Lucy.
    July 15, 2008

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    Ha! This is gorgeous, I love it!!
    (Great title and pic too!)


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    Ears, you are a gardener eh? Loved you pic and your write! You tempt us with your poem..A very good write...you tempt us with your words!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    my hubbie groans at me all the time

    I think his exact words are
    "would you please go hose off...did you plant yourself
    out there!"

    ears
    lol...why yes I did! thankyou!


  • Cannonsfire
    July 14, 2008
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    Sort of have this picture of a pig wallowing lol, interesting take on it. Love, C

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