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My Heaven

Comfy pillows
burrowing
Downy covers
tucked in
Circling Fan
whirring
Husband's arms
embracing
Thunder storms
raging




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Just where I love to be!

A contest entry

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  • leo2
    July 15, 2008

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    I used to know the words to that song by heart. "I'm singing in the rain..." I wish you well in the contest and hope it keeps on raining..lol.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    wonderful poem...

    and yes..home and the safety within we find in our
    beloved loved ones arms!
    That was beautiful and soulful wonderful to enjoy!
    way to write!
    ears/Seattle
    p.s. I took the earthy approach!
    I love summer gardening!


  • Cannonsfire
    July 14, 2008
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    Sounds perfect C