Then she would do what she wanted anyway...
I would always argue with Mama
and then do what she wanted me to do,
but my sister would say, okay, okay...
then she would do what she wanted to do!
Author notes
Compliance.
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF by carole21.
850 points, ended July 16, 2008, 9 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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Don't we all have a sister like that?
Didn't we all want to just wring her neck?
I know I did and still do sometimes. -
Cute. I take it that this was an older sister? Isn't it strange how they always manage to do what they want? Thanks for entering.
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Its a short piece, so its hard for a real critique (at least those which are not obvious).
I liked it, it had a message and a bit of offhanded humor -
it didn't pop as much as I prefer but it is still good -
cute and original write for the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry
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