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Get Up Sister

Missing image
heartbeats before dawn
chances at love
pulsating in random
light

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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Get Up Sister
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ and for some reason when I was seeing a crack of Light- but it seems to have been coming from a small room- hearing reference to attic- also getting an image of a checker board- as is resulting from reading line two of Your piece- and after reading the last line I was seeing a strobe light- but also seeing a female form as if weaving through the flashes- Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Magnificent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~