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Trapped soul

My trapped soul
caged in materialism,
wishes freedom to fly.

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  • georgie
    November 17, 2008

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    A beautiful piece... such wistful longing... amazing how you can say so much in so few words,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • Desire gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Trapped soul
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I'm being shown what appears to be a leer jet and reference to increase in airfare- but seeing profit go into pockets- and the pockets bulging however - quality of service goes down
    Also- I'm being shown an airline stewardess-whether metaphor or symbolism Hearing word: strike- as in like (union strike)...
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Fantastic take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~