EXCITMENT
FEVER
LOVE
BORDOM
FIGHTS
HATE
RAGE
TEARS
ABUSE
DEATH
Author notes
photo bucket pic D To remain together often can lead to death for neither will give up
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 17, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The End
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms: First I noticed the format which is very Creative because I followed the pattern of energy through each word- I kept being shown each word as an event in itself and I'm being given reference to: season...like when the weather changes also- emotions are affected to some degree - the outcome can be pleasant or disastrous-whether metaphor or symbolism of some sort~
Hopefully that makes some sense
(For some reason could not see the image posted though not required)
****Please please credit Photobucket in the AC- Thankies so much
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excitement over death,
Fever from abuse
Love for tears,
Bordom from rage,
Fights leading to hate.
all in all they all lead to death... wow! that was surprising. And this open a totally new prospective for me.
Blessed be
Blanche
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Wonderfully Written!
Oh I like this. Very powerful words that you spoke here. You got the point out that is for sure. In your author notes you said "To remain together often can lead to death for neither will give up" Often we really do not realize how bad it really is because we are blinded. No matter who tells us it is unhealthy we do not believe it. Until it is to late & we have lost ourselves completely, meaning all of who we are or we're. Because of the abuse. Then it takes many years to get through it & find ourselves again. Thus being very hard. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. ♥ ~~Iridessa~~
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wow fantastic list of very powerful emotions good luck in the contest
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I like how you just have a list of words, each action or emotion leading to something a lot more deeper.
Good luck in the contest if it hasn't been judged already.
Much love,
Sammie .. xx -
I like how you just have a list of words, each action or emotion leading to something a lot more deeper.
Good luck in the contest if it hasn't been judged already.
Much love,
Sammie .. xx -
wow..you move this through so well..the emotion the changes, getting stronger and stronger
love your snippet in the author notes too...indeed!
Cindy
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This is a condensed story of my first marriage, missing the word "poverty" or maybe "ignorance" in the slot where boredom is. I truly believe that if I had stayed, one of use would have killed the other. I escaped with my life, leaving him intact with his.
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