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Coming Home

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It was a stormy night
headlights were gleaming
She slammed on breaks
at the same time screaming

Am coming home
Am coming home
one way or another
Am coming home

The car skidded
over the deadly cliff
When help arrived
it was nothing to lift

but they heard her
screaming.....

Am coming home
am coming home
one way or another
Am coming home

Family buried her
yesterday; souls torn apart
When he left her
grave; he left his heart
All he could say was;

Am coming home
Why did you take her?
Lord knows it
Am coming home



Author notes

This come under R&B..a sad man, with a broken heart...

photo art by: thewhitecat
title: Play Me some Blues

I always see this guy in downtown Little Rock, AR in the river market with his guitar. I've started photographing the locals at the rivermarket for something different...by the thewhitecat

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  • Freestyle Bushido
    July 20, 2008

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    excellent write, the rhyme was flawless and you conveyed the story well through these lyrics. excellent work and thanks for entering.

  • Poemdancer
    July 17, 2008
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    Interesting write, very sweet and sad. Excellent rhyming, not at all forced!!