My guilt lies
in eternal darkness
tearfully ~
at heaven's doorway
Author notes
PROMPT:
Picture D
Please let the pictures stir Your rue...Choose one that pulls-
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 17, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a read this one is! WOW! Again, I can relate! I have a few in some of her contest, and well, they are focused on some of the same ideas
Guess we have a lot in common huh?
Congrats on the HM!
and love
Nyetta
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Stunning pen here!
simple yet very deeply emotional and thought provoking. A sincere sadness to this as well. You are oh so talented.
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that was deep an fit the image great. good luck in the contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Heaven's Doorway
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms: First I kept being shown words: soap opera- and hearing reference to cigarettes- also phrase: occasional binge- on diet- if that makes sense- and for some reason- I'm shown a scene from the movie: Prince of Darkness- the mirror- the portal and like the woman stuck on the other side when the mirror is broken She is unable to be freed- whether metaphor or symbolism of some sort~
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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So deep and honest are your words!
I love this piece here.
Good luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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