Jagermeister while babysitting the bosses' kids
Helps to pass the time, but not pass up the mom.
The way she's been sticking around, and making
Light talk isn't unusual, just hot around the collar.
I know I'm 19, and out of my league, but that's
What makes the tension that much more taut.
Like last week when she paid me off, and walked me
out? She held my hand a full three seconds too long.
She made eye contact past the pupils & hot knifed
through my lack of things to make small talk about.
She brought up warmth, and questions that
only a woman that's had children can answer:
Things like where I should "put it",
and how long and consistently I should "keep it there"?
Or how clothes should be peeled back when one is in
a hurry, but not so pressed for speed that the shape
of my manhood should go uncomplimented.
or the smooth small tucked shaved lips of her
grip should go unattended too, even with brief tongue
flicks or slight mouth pulls. Lubrication and steady
unfaltering pumps. The way a young farmer might do
while experimenting with his father's overworked soil.
Back then I fucked like I shopped, quick and efficiently.
A teenager without an age too blame and ride out on.
With an uncertain steady know how that
borderlined pure lost foreverness,
coupled by a young man's guiltless soul patches,
and shuffles still half brand new.
Now, I just wander around like an Alzheimer
patient at the Mall of America.
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Written January 6th, 2004
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Interesting but not quite as descriptive as I might have hoped. Awesome picure.
~Master~
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Shit, as long as you have Budweisers and smokes, you've still got A LOT. lol
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Nothing wrong with being naked.
" Back then I fucked like I shopped, quick and efficiently.
A teenager without an age too blame and ride out on.
With an uncertain steady know how that
borderlined pure lost foreverness,
coupled by a young man's guiltless soul patches,
and shuffles still half brand new.
Now, I just wander around like an Alzheimer
patient at the Mall of America reading. "
I especially like this segment because it was very reminding of some coming of age movies that I have seen. Where the narrator describes his youth later in life. I like how you refer to "I fucked like I shopped"....very abrupt and in your face, I like that. I reminds of some people I know as well. They spent their youth fucking and drugging and now they are just old men sitting on porches with budweiser and cigs wondering where it all went.
An excellent observation of life and youth.
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enjoyable
Interesting picture and enjoyable write
anna
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LOL funny, at the same time... EROTIC! I liked it, great write, keep em cumin... hehe
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LOL At "entertaining" That's to say the least! Great write! I'm actually in shock.... Hold on let me take a breath............................... I can't believe you entered my contest LOL I'm impressed! Thx for entering! Good Luck ...........Sheila
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Wow..I like.. this piece.. I really liked the picture! good write and good luck in the contest!
Sam -
Engaging!
Wow... I clicked on this cause the title made me curious and I found it to be immediately engaging! I like how it ended particularly, I do a lot of "What if" thinking on opportunities that I passed up, although I don't regret my decisions. Fantastic write! -
lol very entertaining poem... I could relate to than on some levels which is a LITTLE scary... haha, good luck!
Trin -
Hey-hey, that's fun. Excellent imagery, and the pic lends a certain quality to the picturing of the scene...
I also like the shopping references at the end.
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Interesting images and choice of words. "like I shopped" Has a focus and is plausible.
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right there.
crap, i hate when the babysitter drinks my booze AND then writes about it on AP. i thought the big tip was enough to keep him quiet. (oh geeze mall of america thats MN not MA). gulp sorry.... -
*twitches*
sexy, the very air is suffused with a hot wanting, this is nicely steamy!
Nyx...
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