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Out of My Reach

Close, but far
I want to be where you are

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  • Desire gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Out of My Reach
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms: First I kept being shown now keep in mind- when I read a person's words- I see things in my frame of reference for interpretation and after reading Your verse I was seeing Freddy Krueger from Nightmare on Elm Street also like the glove he wears- the metal claws- moving and then seeing a man also woman trying to reach out at each other- but like unable to- it is like they are pulled apart-whether a metaphor or symbolism of some sort~ Really wild-
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Magnificent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~