I have had my all consumed,
I lay in a puddle of self pity,
Robbed of my reason for life,
Consumed by a bitter rage,
Tick...
Tick...
Tick...
Just waiting in fear,
Waiting for my mind to be drowned,
In a white hot sea of fury,
A storm that comes out of nowhere,
Destroying all in its path,
Isolating me from love and life,
Dragging me back into the past,
Now awash in the evil I left in my wake,
The scourge of my deeds hold me down,
I cant keep up,
I am falling deeper into the dark,
I give in...
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A contest entry
- JUST WRITE YOUR FEELINGS... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 24, 2008, 21 entries
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I know this storm you speak of all too well...dark and lovely...thank you for the love...
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How devastatingly sad! If it doesn't describe my own pallor at times too! Well versed Poet.
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Waiting for my mind to be drowned,In a white hot sea of fury,A storm that comes out of nowhere,Isolating me from love and life,Dragging me back into the past,wow very deep full of strong powerful emotions the past does not eqaul the future it makes us stronger to become who we are good luck in the contest
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