Walking along the shore
Listening, experiencing
Everything about it...
The soft, wet sand...
Squishing between my toes...
The wind billowing...
Through my hair...
The smell of salt...
So strong in the air...
The sound of waves crashing...
And seagulls calling...
It touches my heart...
All of it, everything...
It's beautiful...
And God created it all.
Author notes
I thought of this while thinking about my family trip to the beach this summer.
A contest entry
- BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY by Rhythm Child.
550 points, ended November 19, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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A great entry
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Billy (Rhythm Child) -
what a great poem...i can smell the ocean and hear the waves...beautiful entry...good luck
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very nice.
that explains the beauty of God's creation perfectly... keep it up.
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